Project 3 Draft Reflection

I've been thinking about my own draft for Project 3, and I have to tell you (Prof. Lay) that I integrated Summers' "Gettysburg Regress" into my paper and I feel that I focused too much on comparing my place (Nassau Veterans Memorial Coliseum) to Gettysburg  (Summers piece), which took meaning away from my feelings on the Coliseum.  My paper would have been stronger and more concise if I did not need to incorporate someone else’s work in my essay.